Focus Group

After creating our first draft for our film trailer we decided that we would ask some students from 6form to view our trailer and tell us whether they liked it or not and what bits they thought we could change.

Here are their thoughts:

Stephanie Woodberry, 18
Good points: - The music is eerie and works well.                                                                                          -It’s jumpy, this added to the mystery of the trailer.

Bad points:    - The clip of Nusrat and Chloe talking are too sudden between that and                                the next clip.                                                                                                                 -The trailer is too short and very confusing, there is no clear narration.

Liam Mulkerrins: 17
Good points:- I like the panoramic view, it works well!                                                                                   - I like the way you used the zoom.                                                                            
Bad points:   - You should make some of the clips darker and add some effects                                    - You need less echoing noises and any dialogue should be louder.
Nikki Robinson: 18
Good points: - The Makeup and costume are amazing!                                                                               - The Scream at the end works really well.                                                                                 
Bad points:   -The trailer has too many cuts and is too fast in between clips.

Kayleigh Wood: 18
Good points: - The music is innocent but is eerie at the same time                                                                - The Newspaper clipping makes it seem more realistic.                              

                       I like the way your character moves,  it’s interesting and makes her seem and you feel uneasy

Bad points:   - I think the music should stand out more                                                                                   - At the end the music should draw out so it draws the audience in.                  -  I think the trailer should be darker and you could use some effects.                                      - I think the newspaper clipping should be longer.